All Comments on 'Dowdy Mother in Law Ch. 07'
by CrassiusNomex
- 10 Comments
They think it shouldn't happen again, but it really should. Cathy is welcome to join in.
Downgrade this chapter - I just couldn't give it 5*. The complete and lack of any real loss at the collapse of what was supposed to be a solid marriage by the characters just doesn't work for me. I get it's easier for you as a writer to skip through all of it, but sorry, just laziness from my viewpoint. There were alternate plot lines you could have gone that would have avoided, or at least diminished it. 4*
Think this was all or-sum please carry on with this story. A four-sum would be great also look forward to any new stores that you write
Another great chapter, except for that bit right at the end of Yvonne never being involved again. Yvonne (and Cathy) need to be in the mix, hopefully as a foursome. Hell, if the protagonist and Viv want kids, they can be the surrogates (with the kids conceived naturally, of course). The Viv/Yvonne stuff was too hot not to go back to.
Fuck Yvonne, cheated on him the whole relationship. But I guess if this was a realistic scenario, everyone has reasons to be pissed, so whatever lol. Guess it's best not to read into it, and just jack off