All Comments on 'Eowyn: The Cage - Ch. 11'
by Barahir
- 3 Comments
For the whole series. This installment fits perfectly with where Eowyn's head was at after chapter 10.
Every reader has a corner of their mind where fiction comes alive and you can project yourself into the story. Even LOTR's carefully de-sexualized depiction of E had me wanting to be Faramir so I could love the Wild Shieldmaiden of Rohan. After reading this series that corner of my mind wants her a hundred times more!
That said, , thank you so much for the praise. I'm really trying to build an Éowyn that makes sense within the context of the story as it exists, but is also vastly more compelling, interesting, and unquestionably hornier than the Tolkien version.
Unfortunately I forgot to change the description, which should be "Brothers." I'll take care of that shortly. Anyway, this now gives the proper background for 12a, which should be posted within a day.