All Comments on 'Family Time... Ch. 01'
by hughjensen
- 16 Comments
your story is very, very hot and i hope you continue it with the parents joining in, which is my fantasy: mother fucked by son, father fucking daughter, plizzz
hot hot hot!
it will be much sexier if son does mom and daughter joins dad.
that amazing for the first time.remember be true to yourself.
Well, it's just too hot! Great start, nicely edited. We're anxiously waiting for more!
I really enjoyed the beginning of your story and am looking forward to see how your story progesses.
Really great start at writing. Very well writen. I hope you include mom in to the mix really soon. Make it a 3 some where dad just happens to walk in on them and starts at it. But then again I am the reader, and you are the writer. So keep it up, can't wait for the next part.
I need mooooore! Thanks so far, this promises to become a great story!
omg, my pussy literally gushed from reading this. i remember when i went on a family trip down to florida and my brother and i shared a room. we eventually saw each other naked and fucked nonstop. he thinks its wrong and we shouldnt do it anymore, but i still masturbate to stories about it.
these stories usually arent written well... not bad but its clear you have an agenda and it dont feel natural. Like, trip, 1 bed, big cock, sex. Ya know? I wouldnt say anything but you asked for comments
Not Bad Not good either
you need to expand on the characters and what they do and think
Keep going and you will get better
cheers
Written in 2006, I don't think we'll be seeing the next chapter any time soon. Why do these assholes always do this? They start a story, title it chapter 1, and never write another word!! What a fucking loser!!
got his fat young cock up his sister's cute little coochie. But what about his mother's capacious cunt? At his age, Mike's got more than enough semen in his teenage balls for both the family twats.
hey man that story was fucking HAWT i enjoyed it soooo much but im writing this in 2016 so plz make a chapter 2 its not too late man you can still write another one plz do it.
but i can't believe this is it? no more chapters? what a cock-tease