All Comments on 'First Night Seduction Ch. 02'
by S_Isemen
- 7 Comments
I hope that you continue the storey as you have made me want to read more. Thank you
The angst, the fears, the turmoil, the denial - they're all here. I suspect you may have been through all this yourself. Thank heavens when there is someone to 'rescue' us from ourselves! By the way - from the lamb to Barber's Adagio, it feels like you know me personally (but no, I'm not a medical doctor). As for the coffee - was it cardamom?
Absolutely perfect description of the conflict we experience when we can't face who we really are and are unable to reveal our truth to others.
Please continue.
Thank-you for those few kind words (I hope you enjoyed the first part as much) and yes the story does go on. The next part has been posted today (8th July) the first part took 3 days to appear, pt. 2 took a week so I've no idea when the clearly busy monitoring team will be ready to post pt. 3. I look forward to reading any comment you may have regarding the next chapters.
Again, so well-written. I love your writing style. I'm sure everyone will like the rest of the story.
Wish I'd met someone like Theo when I needed to. Life might have been a whole lot easier. Great characters, and I love the pace of the story. Hope the sex, when it happens is as hot as I anticipate. I'm sure it will be.
Now, I have one "critical" comment that I need to make. Back in the first chapter, the first sentence in the third paragraph doesn't work at all -- the sense is there, but the punctuation (or lack thereof) makes it very confusing. I know you can't fix it now, but for future submissions if you make them, go back and look at it.