All Comments on 'Freebie Ch. 01'
by Victoriajohn
- 15 Comments
give in to blackmail. It has been said over and over again. It never stops nor isn't enough. But supposedly, she likes this development more than she would admit. Now the husband is a real peace of art by whoring his wife out to his boss and friend, the only two as far as he knows. Whatever happens to these two characters, let them split up and let the blackmailers be caught and punished. Not much more to say about it. G.Belgium.
There has to be a chapter 2. This is a great story & it needs to be continued.
There has to be a chapter 2. This is a great story & it needs to be continued.
I have been following your stories esp. in Non Consent Categories, and have found them to be very good; very much to my liking. Suitably paced, with lots of reluctance and final ease in, its like fucking a virgin who intially is apprehensive and finally jumps in as the pleasure surmounts.
Very Good, keep up the good work and don't forget to post the remaining story.
Enemy At Gates
The long, slow, calculated seduction, told from the woman's point of view is very seductive. One of my favorite story lines.
More, Please.
Follow-up stories to your earlier works would also be very welcome.
Fantastic. Adding you as a favorite author. Love how they develop with the comfortable-uncomfortable dynamic constantly at work. Naughty.
Your story had me hard from part 1 until the end part5. You are a very erotic writer and chose your words well. If it is true then I do envy both of those men. I can't wait to get to the next part of this story. Thanks it was great.
Well written and thought out. I think she needs to get her pussy shaved at some point. I want more, Thanks
Another outstanding story, love that Mary is beginning to get into group sex thing. I wonder what Gerry will think?
10 Big Blazing Stars for Great Writing and a Great plot. We all know that there is Nothing Free in life. I guess our Characters didn't know that. Funny thing, I had a roommate Truck Driver buddy one time. We had so many cookies from the same exact situation. LOL I enjoyed them. Thanks for the effort. Buster2U