- Incest/Taboo
- Growing as a Pair
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All Comments on 'Growing as a Pair'
by Ferax
- 31 Comments
A very different twist on brother-sister sex and a pregnancy. But, they both worked together and the children are healthy. Hopefully, his sister will get tied after her baby is born this time. They need strict birth control. Hopefully, her brother gets a well paying job to take care of them all.
It would be interesting if his sister would become an oral expert and keep herself safe until later. Maybe, more details about their sexual activity, physical details and sex play. Thanks.
Horny2doit,
I appreciate your comment, thanks!
The sister is unlikely to get her tubes tied. While she acted to prevent the pregnancy, take a look at week 2 Friday. The risk intensified the sex for her. And the next day the thought of the risk had her capitulating even though he almost shot in her less than 24 hours previously.
For better birth control, she went 5 years of regular sex with the attitude above without getting pregnant.
Also, her PhD might not land her a six figure income, but Stephen getting a good job won't be necessary.
So I liked the premise of them getting laid up in a cabin for a few weeks but I wouldn't do a day-by-day format if you're not going to change things up too much. It got really repetitive day-to-day and as a reader, you're like, "alright, I get it." Then there was the trading at the store. Initially, you showed them with money as Kayla went to the store and bought supplies including the condoms. Later though, they have to trade? Where'd the money go? They don't have credit cards? Stay consistent or explain it. Finally, while I liked the story somewhat, I can imagine it being so much hotter if their relationship didn't start so fast. Had they fought it for the first couple weeks while stuck in their together, but the more it felt like they were living as husband and wife in a 19th century world, they relent. And then you just see the passion that had been built up released.
Loved the story and detail. However I am not a fan of "my sister, my mom, etc" getting pregnant, that is such a standard or common approach. That ruins it for me. Great Story otherwise.
Story was a little long and too much daily detail and yet interesting enough that I finished it. Also the being trapped for so long without any outside assistance was a little unbelievable. I have always fantasizes about being trapped in a cabin with someone so the story hit home with me.
Just wanted to add something..I loved page 4 the most!! From sis taking control,yo the dirty talk,as well with the parents and I the way Kayla shamelessly talked to Stephen while she was fucking him was the most hottest,intense scene between bro/sis I've had the pleasure of reading in a looong time🙌🏽🙌🏽Congrats,I added you as one of my fav and hope more stories to come.. Brian
Glad it played out in 1 post most stories like this usually takes 6-10 parts.
I'd say it was a middle schooler, but I'm not sure a MS student could keep up that long. Thought it was never going to end.
Lots of repetition in the diary-like cabin part made it tedious reading for me.
I would have thought one of them would get snipped after twins.
I enjoyed the story. Love and tenerness . However
Why didn't she stop by to see her parents after the bridge was finished?
Why didn't anyone visit her at college for 8 months?
Didn't they talk on the phone?
After birth of girls a 2 bedroom would be too small. 2 adults & 2 children. I know bro & sis shared one room. Didn't grandparents ever visit.
Biggest question..get pregnant once with a "PHANTOM" Dad but twice? Something rotten in Denmark
She didn't stop by to see her parents because they were several hours in the wrong direction. She lost two weeks of school, that's a lot. She needed to get back. The trip was supposed to be how she saw her parents as it was.
As for 8 months, that's incorrect. It was more like 5. And no, they didn't visit her. Most parents don't go visit their college attending children. Instead they join up for holidays. The question is where was she on the winter holidays. I didn't really explain that she finished out her winter classes and then did her spring semester, but she did. That left quite a gap there normal kids would go home. Right about when her morning sickness would be the worst.
Yes they talked on the phone. The story explicitly stated they did.
And a 2 bedroom would be too small, but it is what it is. Grandparents would be fooled because it is Mom in one bedroom, Uncle in another, with kids taking a living room. It's a mess, but living in tiny spaces never is easy.
And about four times by a phantom dad? I know a girl who got pregnant four times from random hookups. Four kids, four different fathers, none of them she remembered that she met before. Granted that woman was straight outta trailer, but... Anyway, I guess Kayla's pregnancies are little odd given her education and socioeconomic status, but it isn't outside the realm of possibility.
Additionally... The reason there was money initially and trading later was because when there are limited resources, money later isn't as important as food today. Most cities do not have enough food to feed everyone for longer than a week if all trucks across the nation suddenly stopped moving. Sone cities don't even have a few days supply.
Very nice story...a bit too long for my taste, but it was worth the extra time to read.
5 stars for a very good read and story! However, are their parents stupid? He goes to college 4 years, parents never meet another girl. Sis is now going for her doctorate, gets pregnant Again, no boy friend. I think parents will figure it out one day.
Loved the story and development! Hoping for more and more from you! Kept writing and I'll keep reading!
Yep. Liked this story. Liked the way it was all told from the sister's point of view. She was obviously a strong and determined young woman. What I did find unusual was that neither the sister or her brother expressed their love for each other. Although they obviously did love each other over and above familial love.
Don't think it needs another chapter, the fact that there's another baby on the way says that they have settled in as a family.
Just a suggestion, but try to not have entire paragraphs with the same sentence start. I got bored after one paragraph had every sentence start with 'He', then soon after it was 'I'. You could have cut the number of sentences by half with judicious structure. This also makes it a more enjoyable experience for the reader.
As one of the greatest 'accidentally incest' stories I've had the pleasure of reading!
Especially it being an older sis/younger brother type which I have the preverbiable sweet tooth for haha, but seriously,that spooning scene where the siblings unintentionally became one was so damn hot it literally was too much for me I myself unintentionally pre ejaculated at that part! Oh I did finish the story after that as I NEVER lost my horniness and came for a second time by the end. ;)
So yeah, I didn't just liked this story,I Loved it! 5 stars and I hope a second part is in the works...
How I wish I was her brother. Waking up because of sucking and fucking. Before going to sleep, she will fuck you again. Sleep together like you don't have any problems and enjoy every moment that you've been together. Like they just go in the flow of a happy life.
I really like the story.
This tale of accidental incest never lost the pace, never went over the top, never lost the ring of truth. Well done and, to coin a phrase, keep it up!
This is the way brothers and sisters should always get along. Thanks for the read
Entertaining story, but from experience tender breasts and morning sickness don't start so soon.
I get sore breasts just before my time of the month and always had sore breasts just a couple of days after getting pregnant.
I really loved this story it, was the right length, and the progression was perfect. Hope to read more stories
Outstanding story. As a former "hunter" with my dad when I was younger the detail was exceptional and spot on. Wish I had found a girl like Kayla. Thank you for a very entertaining piece.
Eh, this one is difficult. I liked pretty much everything about the story except how Kayla treated Stephen sometimes. How she told him about the pregnancy and how she forced him to combine her was appalling