All Comments on 'Including Me Ch. 03'

Okay, this is kinda weird.

Her first son pledge to be with her forever and then gives her away so he could have the daughter making him just like his father.totatly ruined the whole story

How is this story like a fine wine?

They get better with age except the story. It doesn't.

A woman's vulva still has the clitoris as part of it. I guess you didn't believe me when I told you that before. It's a shame there isn't a way that could be looked up, so you wouldn't actually need to believe me. Someday, I think soon, there will be some way for information like that to be found. I think they'll call it the internet, but I could be wrong.

I know this is fiction but...

She sets out to have a child with her deadbeat father.

She has a son (and daughter) with her son.

Then she has a son with her son/grandson.

That's a lot of generations of inbreeding.

Mighty shallow gene pool.

If all the characters, her bum dad is the best of the lot, at least he didn't know he was gathering a child with his daughter, the rest have no excuse.

I was going to write something negative about this story, but your joke was so fucking stupid that it made this story look like Pulitzer prize winning novel. It was one of the most embarrassing things I ever read in these comment sections. Even if that joke was just for your own amusement, I can't even comprehend how anybody could be so idiotic that they thought it would be remotely funny. I'm hoping you would respond to this comment so you can at least attempt to make up for how you embarrassed yourself.

I for one enjoyed this story.

There's no point for responding beyond this to someone that's too stupid to even know how to set up an account here.

lame response, but still better then what you wrote before.

This was a fascinating narrative. I was distracted how the narrative jumped around through the three chapters. A couple times, I had to jump back to read and pick up the thread. But it really was an interesting story from the point of view of the main character. She was relating her own story in a stream of consciousness.

The story is a little strange (as someone else noted, too). But it was a well-told story. It stretched my perspective and got me to think about the nature of relationships and even marriage. Thanks for sharing it.