by vegitto306
This series is really good.
I beleive there will be groupsex with Nora, make it a surprise for Nora like they were caught in the act buy someone already in the harem.
love your story - please keep going! only fault - sometimes you mix up the names of the characters, but I know what you mean. ;-)
Waw... Very wonderful series buddy.. Always waiting for new update or episode... Loving the plot and plans..
Nora is now totally submissive... Ravi would be nailed with a full proof evidences so that. He cannot escape..
Just the episode of tara with karan was something I was not comfortable..
But rest is azing... Pooja rile is very enjoyable
Kee it up dude
Sometimes I feel that plot hasn't progressed much or not at all, however, I agree with others that story is going great. We are still in dark about what transpired between Suraj and Ileana in Goa.
It is probably already in the plot, but it makes sense to have Suraj at the helm of the Kapoor industries thus making him head of the household at home and business. It would also be good to see someone from Oberoi family joining Suraj's harem for revenge plot. And finally, please end story clearly, do not leave it hanging like some authors on this site.
Please, please, please, keep on writing. I have read many stories here in literotica but this one is up there with the best one. If I could give six stars I would, wait what I'm saying, I would give you 10 if I could. Your story is very well written, spelling is pretty good. Keep on writing my friend. You are in my favorite writer list and looking forward to your next installment of this series. PS. Also loved your Family Vacation series.
Thank you for the great feedback. I do intend to finish this story up properly, I still have many chapters to go. Any ideas/suggestions are welcome.
15 is written and will be uploaded in a few days (editing it)
Will start on 16 this weekend
please finish this story it seems taking a long break is causing very different chapters each time
Bhai tu mujhse edit krwa lia kar, editing tools rehne dia kar. Itne Itne din queue me pdi rehti hai story teri.
, you posted on your bio page on 24th, that 15 is complete and working on 16, you again posted on Jan 4 that 15 is edited and posted. It shouldn't be taking this long to publish after posting. Something must be wrong on how you post. Please check and repost if needed.
Seems like chapter 15 is still not uploading correctly? Just checking to make sure you know.
Something is fishy, vegitto306 was able to post first several chapters without a hitch. He is still able to post his other stories but this one seems to hit snags al of a sudden.
Bro just give up and post it on a different channel and drop the link for us here. We've been waiting for it for way too long now
At this point I'm just here to read the comments. The desperation to get the new chapter is a testament to how great the story is.
Checked out the forums. It seems that there's a holiday backlog. I've been wasting time editting the current story too many times now.
Will start on the next one and this one will come out when the mods get to it. Sorry for the delay everyone - but it seems to be across many series.
Hey brother make a new account on literotica and post the remaining parts there. There's something wrong with your account. The story is still not uploaded and people are eagerly waiting for the next part
It's not a backlog try reuploading the same story
It doesn't take this long new stories are getting uploaded on this site daily only yours story is taking this much time
Amazing story. So hot. Please keep writing stories of Indian families. Include a gangbang and raise the kinky, nasty level a notch.