All Comments on 'Joining the Family Business'

Without a doubt the worst incest/taboo story I've read in my 6 yrs on this site. Extremely stupid dialogue. Lame sex scenes. Please don't do anymore stories till you get with someone that knows how to do it. Yuck

Really enjoyed it. Hope you continue her journey as a sex slave. Would love a good twist about who buys her. Please continue!

This is one of the worst stories I ever ready on here! Please don’t continue writing if this is garbage you are going to produce!

I think that if you fleshed out the section on the programming and training, especially at the hands of her strict instructor, you'd get a better reception.

Welcome back to writing :)

really enjoyed this....had me playing with myself as I read on .... xx oo kandy

It's an interesting choice to take what other people might spend an entire story on, you went through in one paragraph. If you were following up on the story, and there were flashbacks, that might work. But it feels like you missed an opportunity because the set-up is quite good.

I would like to see more chapters, like how much she gets sold for, who her Master or Mistress will be, and how she is treated.

Will there be more chapters?

I’d like to read more about her training, the auction, her new master and her return home as a manager. I hope you’re working on it!

This needs more chapters.

Please continue this story! I'd love to read both a sequel and a prequel as the one thing I didn't like about this was how you just skipped all the training. Still very hot, keep up the sexy writing!