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Click hereShe took the glass and the pill, looking at me with adoration. She took the vitamin and drained the glass of water. "Thank you, Jim. I like that you take care of me."
I laid back down next to her, pulling her tight to me in the spoon position. As soon as I did, my dick started swelling again. Holy crap! I knew I was spent, but that sexy ass pressing against me started getting me hard again. Holding on to one of her perfect breasts didn't hurt either. But, I needed sleep. I kissed the back of her head, and whispered, "Good night, Linh. Sweet dreams. See you in the morning."
With that, we both drifted off to sleep. And, if I did snore, she never complained about it.
- COMMENTS
Lovely premise.
Well written.
Sex lacks details though.
The first time she touches his cock it's during the massage. Not nearly enough in the way of exploring/playing/teasing his cock and balls while she learned about it/them. She should have handled him and teased him learning about what he liked and enjoying his rapture. That didn't happen.
Ditto re subsequent sex scenes.
Four stars. Being generous.
Well....I wonder why they stop at 5 stars. I read your prelude and wondered if I wanted to continue. You may as well go and scratch it out. I have never been comfortable about dominating a female and still am not. You very cleverly took a nice slow build up and dragged us in. Brilliantly descriptive, but also gentle and caring, I liked the way you showed the perspective from both sides. I would love the chance to be in this position in real life, even if just once. Your writing brought that fantasy to reality in my head. Just excellent. A.
Excellent start to your writing career. Serious contender for the 2021 awards. See there's a part 2 but hope you'll be writing more here.