All Comments on 'Little Packages Ch. 12'

OMG so worth the wait. Thank you for a great story!!!!!

Worth the wait. An amazing chapter that wraps everything up!

This story continues to be interesting and very enjoyable to read. Thank you.

Most excellent! I thank you for sharing such a wonderful story!

A very enjoyable chapter. You did a great job with the wedding.

Perfect! Awesome! 100* if possible.

Will be sad to see the story end after the next chapter.

This has been a highly enjoyable, 5 star story so far, but will there be more? Will Kitten and Daddy somehow avoid trading sexy time for baby chaos? If they do, it will be a better fit in Sci-fi/Fantasy than Mature.

This is not even close to my kink, but what an amazing story from the very first chapter. These characters breathe, bleed, grieve, and rejoice -- so real, so believable, and so well presented. Not a false step anywhere. Look forward to reading more.

Once again, well done

Enjoyed the story... Great ending

Talk about an AMAZING story. From the first word of chapter one to the last word of chapter twelve.

Always a great read. Thanks.

Every chapter just gets better. Absolutely perfect.

Beautiful story as always! Love the characters, shame that this is the last installment but it had to end eventually.

Thanagar, this is without a doubt my favorite story on the entire site. Thank you so much for taking your time, and giving it all of the loving polish and attention it deserved. I've said in comments on previous chapters that I was in love with these characters, and that's even more true today. This would be an excellent and satisfying ending to the tale, and I'm sure nobody would begrudge you if it were - but selfishly, I hope it isn't. In either case, well done.

I wrote a comment after chapter 5 "Really good story. Thank you for sharing..." I think I wrote then that this could be in the 'fantasy' category... Fairy tale ending? Just about I was wondering how you were going to finish this and enjoyed the descriptions and conversations and the people in Venice. Very well done, I will enjoy reading more of your work.

Best chapter yet. Well worth the wait, and glad to hear you survived the holidays unscathed. Looking forward to the next chapter in their relationship. 5-Stars

I have had the most fun reading this. I saw the characters in my minds eye. I routed for them always. Such a marvelous story. Well done and thank you for sharing.

This has been the best story I've read on here. Real life with my personal life dynamic so very well done. I lost my wife of 34 years to cancer and was saved by a younger woman who is now Collared and my Little/Kitten. So many parallels to my life.

Thank you!

I don't know why people are saying this is the ending, thanagar has said this is going to go for a few more chapters after this one.

Just to clear up any confusion, there will be a Chapter 13, hopefully coming out in February. I promised an ending and, as tempting as it is to stop here (I really do like that last sentence), I've known how this was going to end since Chapter 3. I have to finish the job.

I will be sorry to see it all come to an end. I have really enjoyed the storyline.

This is an amazing story. Beautifully written and a wonderful journey following Kitten and her Daddy. This story had me on a rollercoaster of emotions. I felt a definite connection to my life given there's a 33 year age difference between me and my Daddy. Some people don't understand it but we saved each other, similar to Ben and Kit. Beautiful story that had me leaking on both ends.

I don't even pretend to find DD or other power game sex understandable -- It's just not me. But this story gave me an idea of what it's all about. Writing wise, it's top tier. The characters and their motivations are all really well done. Once you've wrapped this one up, I'd be interested in hearing about Meg's adventures.

So good and inspiring writing! Can"t wait for next chapter👍👍👍

Wow. What a story! Thoroughly enjoyed it!

Absolutely fantastic story !!

Somehow you managed to make me want be Ben as well as kitten 😄

Brilliantly told - so much love and affektion … and of course breathtaking sex ☺️

If this isn't the end, I can’t wait.. if it is, well its a great ending…

You’re wasting your talents here. This was a wonderful, novel length story and you could sell this easily. You’re awesome

Wow, just brilliant! You genuinely made me laugh and you genuinely made me cry. So well written and such an engaging tale. I wait with baited breath for whatever next you bring us.

Brilliant. Thank you,

I don't have the required capacity to fully explain how much I enjoyed that.

This lovely novel has saved me many evenings. Can't even really put it into words - seems like I lack mine after reading so many well-put of yours.

Simply awesome. Worth ten stars if it were possible. The series is well worth publishing in book format.

Very good,

That was some absolutely excellent writing.

I think this is my third time reading this series. The only thing that disappoints and saddens me is Meg’s relationship with the French couple. It feels like she is settling for these two. But, I guess that is an indication of how invested I am in her character. She could have her own story. Thank you for hours of entertainment!

I’m not much good at words so I copied this guys comment which said it all for me.

rhetthebratover 1 year ago

This is not even close to my kink, but what an amazing story from the very first chapter. These characters breathe, bleed, grieve, and rejoice -- so real, so believable, and so well presented. Not a false step anywhere. Look forward to reading more.

Yeah Canada!!

What I wanted to say has already been said by Anonymous 9 months ago

I’m not much good at words so I copied this guys comment which said it all for me.

rhetthebratover 1 year ago

This is not even close to my kink, but what an amazing story from the very first chapter. These characters breathe, bleed, grieve, and rejoice -- so real, so believable, and so well presented. Not a false step anywhere. Look forward to reading more.