All Comments on 'Melissa's New Position Ch. 01'
by eclecticperversities
- 10 Comments
You got a good start. I am moving right on to Chapter 2 immediately.
A good beginning that has many interesting possibilities and avenues. We will see.
As is, just living in a whore house could be a boring story. You better have something interesting planned, and I can't wait to see what it is.
Perhaps the best of this kind I've ever read till now.
I read two more chapters before commenting. I think this first chapter hints at how good the following chapters are, but some readers may give up too early, thinking it’s going to be a boring sex parade (it’s anything but!). Maybe if Melissa’s inner torment were more fleshed out before she gets naked for her audition. I think many women have wondered if they’d have sex with a hot guy for money, so zero in on that. But the story also shows just how great it can be to be helpless, just along for the ride as skilled masters give you what you didn’t know you needed. It gets to the core of the appeal of non-con for me. I hope readers stick with it cause chapter 2 is smokin’!
Even if they do sound like cheapskates at $1,000 per week but nicely covered by saying the last woman earned $250 K in about 2 years.
The “corporate woman” isn’t a new idea by any means still it’s a bonus to locate it on a tropical island! Do the female Execs have access to the bonus scheme too?
well considering she had no experience she could at least use those abilities to her benefit.
This isn't even non-con. It's a straight up consensual transactional arrangement. One that she proposed. I've read the next chapters and while there is a bit of thinking, musing, and psychological development, it is nowhere near actual regret or unconsent. Heck, she probably dislikes her job a lot less than minimum wage employees who dislike their jobs.