All Comments on 'Melissa's New Position Ch. 09'

One of the best pieces of writing I've ever encountered in my many years on Literotica. You have a well founded knowledge of the power exchange between a dominant & submissive that I have rarely found in erotic writing. It is my hope that you continue writing & contributing. I also must say I had a very similar story idea to yours - down to the island setting - one of the differences was my "Melissa" was an unwilling captive. Thanks for an interesting & enjoyable read. Carry on!

Thanks so much for the kind words and encouragement. I know this is going slowly, since I have so many other demands on my time, but I appreciate people hanging in there. Melissa's journey is a long one, and we are a ways from being done.

on the last chapter, still that’s not difficult. I know it was commented on in this chapter but she is painfully naive which makes the way that almost everyone who is using her seem like abuse.

Not so with Mr Dorn though, he spoke to her like another human being whereas Rick the pilot addresses her as a whore.

Don’t get me wrong it wasn’t the girl on girl action that pissed me off, just the way she’s being treated.