All Comments on 'Mom's Titfuck Ch. 03'

You should make it a harem have them move in Janet home that is a mansion and you should start them having more sex not just blowjobs and titfucks make the girls only for him.

I have to admit that I really enjoy this story for now. It is working as intended, which means making us jerking off ( or masturbating for women ) and it is meant to be taken as a fantasy obviously ( because let's face it, a 10 inch cock would hurt like crazy, and 36 K boobs, or even 30JJ, well the woman will have some serious back pains ).

As such, it is greatly done, even though the dialogues could use a little bit more consistency at some points, especially when it concerns the sizes of their assets. Maybe, insisting a little less on the sizes so that way it flows a little more naturally. Also, how com Jeff's sister doesn't know what a titfuck is, when the previous chapter she was talking about Jeff fucking her tits ? That is just a little nitpick on my part of course.

Also, I would have to agree with the other comment about making it into a harem. You have the perfect setting for that, and as it is not really realistic, and more like a fantasy, it wouldn't be impossible to form a harem around Jeff. Honestly, I am really surprised that there aren't more harem fics on this website, as they wouldn't be impossible to do, seeing as most stories here are fantasies. There is always another man or severals joining the group, more often than not guys that we don't really care about, just to have gangbangs or orgies.

It is really rare to see a true harem with one guy and several girls and there would also be some room for romance to develop. I also don't know why there aren't more harem fics, maybe some people are not really confident with several girls and in some way they need help, but who cares here, it is just a fantasy where you can do whatever you want to do.

Thank you for your comments. I see a lot of constructive criticism and some great ideas. I'm writing the next chapter and will definitely use some of those ideas. Still finding my rhythm and I will try write good fantasy stories.

Yes 4 huge titties for huge dick. Then later some more huge titties. I just wish someone had breast milk so he could get good titfuck and nurse at the same time

You're not using apostrophes for possessive nouns like you're supposed to and you should spell out the number (e.g. four, not 4). Also you sometimes forget to put or end the apostrophes for the quotations. Your story is hot but work on these things and it will be better and more professional-looking

You need to have the females get some pleasure also need some fucking in the story's. I know its man writing this because of it only the guy gets off and not the females. You can't have a one side get pleasure and not they other after reading a few stories that ll I get out of it.

I second the ones who ask for a harem story. This story could easily be turned into one but it seems that this author tends more toward casual sex in his stories, which is something I don't like. Harem is more about committed relationships. The women in the group don't say my pussy is yours and then they let anyone "use" it. Many authors seem to confuse a harem with group sex involving several guys.