All Comments on 'More Than This Ch. 02'
by HarryC
- 6 Comments
Amazing story line, the whole love pentagon is really awesome, can't wait to find out what happens next in the story
One of the better stories I've read in many a month. You've been bookmarked, sir. One issue, and it seems that it could have easily been resolved: what's with this 6'2'', rugby playing man not being able to wrestle away some pictures from a skinny teenaged girl? Seems like a more plausible way to go about it would be to give Kim a weapon, knife, making her look even more crazy/horny; or eliminating the camera altogether and having Kim threaten to "tell" his girlfriend about his indiscretion. Very good, nonetheless.
Sorry about the long wait for chapter 3. If it's any consolation, I do know exactly what is going to happen, and I think you'll find it really surprising. Seriously, it's not what you think.
I've been really busy lately, but the next chapter should be done soon.
Oh, on the subject of a 6'2 tall guy being unable to restrain a woman - well, the thing is, yes, he could restrain her, but he doesn't. This is a peculiarity of mine - and mine alone, perhaps - but I'm a fairly big guy myself, and I always worry about hurting people - not just women - who are smaller than myself. So I tend to by quite gentle in my day to day dealings, and as such I conveyed the same quality upon the lead character here.
Well, as a romantic I wasn't happy with some elements of your story. But it was well told, and I'm curious as to where it will go.
Keep going.
absolutely appalled you ruin the one woman who loved him even more then his own sister could. she doesnt love him, no matter what she says. she just loves his cock. pure and simple and to take the one TRUE love out of his life, is just wrong in my opinion.