- Incest/Taboo
- My Pregnant Sister
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All Comments on 'My Pregnant Sister'
by FantasiesinSleep
- 16 Comments
I
Always wanted to
Fuck my brother and now that I
Have kids and my partner dose not want to fuck me I want my brother even more now
Wow, what a great composition for such a short story. A brother and sister connect for a compassionate, loving and intimate, though incestuous coupling. One that I trust will continue, not only out of a duty to support the sister, but one that they both desire for the love they have discovered for one another. A Sibling's with Benefit's relationship that could continue even if one or both become involved with someone else. They could rendezvous remotely whenever possible, just as long as it doesn't affect their other relationship(s). You might consider such a relationship in a follow-up chapter.
Nice story ad nicely written, but way too "wham bam, thank you ma'am."
Nice premise.
But the sex was too quick. It started too quickly, too abruptly. It got to cock in pussy too fast.
It finished too quickly. Needed slower sex. Needed much more foreplay than the little there was. Needed some involvement of her breasts. What they looked like. What they felt like. How sensitive they were because of the pregnancy.
Certainly needed some playing with her pussy and gentle fingering before the fucking began. Perhaps a little pussy licking because he was afraid of hurting her or the baby. Certainly some discussion of how she felt unattractive being pregnant, and him convincing her otherwise -- with words and deeds.
Others have said they'd like to see more. I agree.
Four stars.
Well, there's no actual but as in something wrong. It's just I agree with UAlbanyGirl and others that, despite your preamble, we sure wish you would add more. Five.
Jedd
Great story. Well written and fun. But damn you making us wonder what happens next with mom after you’ve said this won’t be a series! ;)
Fantastic so hot n sexy. Really could be a wonderful series about sibling love and romance.
But not too accurate - the baby is well protected until her water breaks. Still putting that little snippet of their conversation aside, it was a lovely story. Thanks for sharing!