by cinnabutt
So, from sexless marriage to a parking lot BJ after telling her u want to boink younger women .... yeah, thats a fantasy all right.
Your story was fine. But why make it so extreme by saying the marriage lasted 20 years (7,300) days before hubby spoke up? Who could last thousands and thousands of days, beginning at a young man, with no real sex life? You could have said two or three years and told the same story, but make it more realistic.
Competently written, but lacking in enough detail to set up anything or explain how we got here. Also, too much telling instead of showing in the paltry build up. 3*