All Comments on 'New Free Use Law Announced Pt. 03'
by RedheadLottie
- 6 Comments
I like the story, but too short. Also, re-read what you have written, you will notice some of your sentences do not make sense, could be your spell checker is fighting your grammar checker. Keep going.
Good first effort. I like how you turned the compulsion of free-use into an opportunity for yourself. Made me wish I were your brother. Looking forward to more chapters. Well done.
Too short! Good story but I'm afraid I'll get tired of the page at a time dribble and stop reading.
Well, like the theme but chapters are too short. Maybe the first three could have been one? At least this 'free use' theme is only geared towards the family and does not include unlimited 'free use' by any male, anywhere, anytime.
I love the imagery you provide. I've been totally hard since I began reading your stories this morning. I sure wish that I was a family member of yours. Oh the fun we could have.