All Comments on 'Slavery Games Ch. 01: Coaching'

even it was crystalclear where this was going from the first sentence...

I hope Bridgett gets to the cross

but the're is room for some criticisme and people love those...

First: I understand why you took the POV of a journalist writing a newspaperarticle (you can tell stuff and don't have to show everything, but if your story says it has the form of a newspaper(?) article - it should read as such.

Maybe a mixed form - start with an interview (thus dialogue based) and then a traditional recount form would have been better. On the other side... a interview that actually "explains" stuff frequently isn't quite goot either. (why has the interviewer has to ask basic things? Didn't he/she do his preparations)

Second: Everybody could guess where the story was going. (not a criticisme just a fact) I actually liked this. Not groundbreaking but solid work. I gave the story 5 stars because I liked the setting and actually enjoyed it. Keep it up...

Greetings,

I loved this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

This was incredible. I just want more.

The next chapoter can go several ways, and I am curious as to which way it will go.

I these Nosy Reporter Protagonist stories... looking forward to Chapter Two.

I hope there are lots more chapters to come. I love this story and these characters.

Thank you for all these comments and encouragements.

Originally, it was a little story. And then my editor told me that she would hope to read the following soon. So I decided to do a follow-up. Withall your feedback, three more parts are in preparation.

Thank you to all of you.

Thank you to those who help me to do this work.

What am amazing story series. Enjoyed every moment of it