by jackanory6969
I don’t think I have read a more erotic piece of literature. Please continue through the days to cum, you have my hard attention.
Can not wait to future chapters. Please keep them cuming, I mean us😀
Thanks for writing these great stories.
Great story line between Sofia and her dad and adding in Lacy & Pete even better - Plus other adventures loved the massage theme
How about a DP Sofia (her dad anal) & Pete Pussy while Lacy helps and pushes the situation.
Thanks for writing
This story HAS to keep on going. It would cruel and unusual punishment to end it before Jack gets to make love to his gorgeous “wife”. Please keep the heat on HIGH.
I've been reading stories on this site for 3 years now, and have never cum (so many times in one story) across a story so well writen and perfectly described, I just created an account after this long. just so I can favorite story this and read it again, great work,
Can't wait to hear more!
Five stars. A great stroke story. If I were Jack, Pete could have cleaned me. Looking forward to reading more of this story as I'm teasing my nipples and stroking my cock. Wish I had someone to help give me relief - someone with whom to read this story together. Maybe act out the events too. Mmmmmmm!
Your eye for detail and your ability to set the scene and the mood is fantastic. While all the words are in the dictionary, you put them together far better than most. Even with only (so far) two stories, you are well on your way to being one of the top authors here.
I loved the story and I hope there's more soon. I hope they do finally begin fucking and that Sophia goes home pregnant.
This is 5 stars story. Very exciting that the dad is being reluctant but has a lot of innuendos with his daughter.
It was a nice alibi that Sofia was a able to suck her dad's cock. Maybe it would also be exciting when Sofia finds another alibi for her dad's cock be buried in her pussy.
Glad that Pete was not able to suck Jack's cock. That will spoil it. That should be in gay category.
Hope you continue that after a few days Jack and Sofia meet a Mother and son. A Mother also being reluctant but enjoys the teasing and the innuendos with her son.
Please continue this story. It could only get hotter, especially with the connection with daddy and daughter. More please.
Def five stars!
Favo story so far. Very well paced and erotic!
I personally like the bi thing. I am courious where you go with the next chapter!
Keep going please!!
Great story, well written with good dialogue and character development. A successful single dad with a somewhat manipulating "daddies girl" daughter could see himself in this.
The one thing lacking is more. You have left me wanting and "Impatiently Waiting for More".
I find myself checking everyday for the next chapter!!!! Love it
I gave your first story 7 ⭐️s, but this one definitely gets 8! Holy shit, the foursome on the massage bed was great!
Jack needs to gill Sofias cunt with his seed and eat her pussy till she squirts in his mouth.