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Click hereAlthough I could never agree with their incestuous relationship, I find that whenever I begin to doubt the honesty of their love for one another, I only have to read this letter and suddenly I feel ashamed at my closed-mindedness.
"My darling Jessica
I loved you from the first moment I laid eyes on you, I loved you as we were growing together and I love you more with each passing day.
Without you I would never have existed. I was always living on borrowed time and although my life was short, every second with you was worth a thousand without. If I had to live my life again, the only thing I would change is the time it took me to wake up to my feelings for you.
Even though I leave this world and pass on to the next my love for you will remain strong and my spirit will be with you always.
You were my life. You are my soul. You will always be my lucky star.
Christopher"
I will be marrying Jessica this spring, but I know that I'll never fill that special place in her heart that still contained Christopher's spirit. I wouldn't even want to. That is their place and theirs alone.
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Thank you for reading. I really do appreciate it. Somehow having you (yes, you!) know is making this that little bit easier to deal with.
- COMMENTS
You are marrying a woman who fucks her brother, her parents, her uncles, her cousins, etc. and who will never love you completely...
Congratulations, I suppose.
I will just pretend as though the Author's note at the end does not exist. It's just a mood killer. For me the story ends right where Jessica and Chris become an excusive couple.
2/5 because of the sad ending which was totally unnecessary or indeed germane to the story.
You had a happy ending that all readers could identify with and threw it away for notoriety of suicide. Pathetic!!!!
Yep, scores 2/5, you are lucky you didn’t get 1/5
Writing wise i wouldn't say anything.
It takes lot of courage, Patience and Intelligence to write these kind of CRAP.
Fucking disgusting.
Is this how you Think about people. Male popularity in general.
Everywhere i read.... Everywhere i see all there about males are , they are Horndogs. They are Generally Stupid. All they want sex.
Actually its not far from truth.
Men are usually like that. You can easily manipulate and control a man with sex.
And he'll be a forever slave.
In this particular story all characters are purely disgusting with double standards.
How much you Justify . Certainly black wouldn't turn into white.
Sad as this is, and I have the right to say that all you have to do is look at the bullet holes tonight Cut the Rope Burns I have the right my nephew had the right when he practically took his life these stories need to be told
I thought for sure, that the whole depression thing Christopher went through in his teens had to do with his feelings for Jessica and him feeling extreme shame for having such feelings for his own sister.... And then to find out both his brother and father had been fuckin the love of his life for years was what drove him off a cliff.
You're a man with a heart of gold and I wish you both many years of happiness I know the loss of a loved one personally myself and my wife knows about it as well she knows that my first loves place will always be in my heart but take comfort in knowing that lifetime together can bring its own happiness as well good luck to both of you
One question, though, dear author, and I lack a "non-anonymous" -just pseudonymous, which is so very different and more courageous than anonymity! teehee! #sarcasm- account, so any response shall have to be confined to the comments, crude communication mechanism though that be. Now to the question: you say in your notes you sre married to this...lady?...trollop? Yet your profile, which details such interests as swingers, and more, suggesting great attention to detail, lists you as single. Is the "authors note" utilized in this story that of a pov character? One that never appears, created for the simple purpose of generating an "omniscient narrator?" I could wish it were made clearer, but then, that was far from the only flaw I perceived as I made my way through this text. (one stops in the middle only if one is a philistine. Finishing a book is no more an indicator of enjoyment than finishing a meal is. It is simply what one elects to do. In this case? The last course, alas, *was* as overcooked and salty as the first. And dessert was never provided. Analogy is an entertaining pastime. Keep trying, though, there were many glimmers of talent here. I know whereof I speak- I have been a beta-reader for many years now. Good sampling of slush-VS-gold when doing that. This is slush, IMO, of course, but even the greatest authors write fodder for the slushpile now and again. Hell, that's essentially the explanation for James Patterson! He (no Ghostwriters...neeever) publishes every word he types, slush or not. And whoosh! Slush=good writing suddenly. Keep writing. Do some research on narrative voices. Practice!
this story has touched me in more ways than than i could ever express.... GREAT JOB if i could i would give it 15 stars
I absolutely agree. Much as I hate suicide, I feel that it was the only option available to him... Oh my God, especially after the beginning of page 5!!
I'm not surprised the poor sod was depressed living with such a pile of garbage.
The story was utter bollocks from go to whoa.
This was kinda hard to finish because of the tragedy in the end... sometimes love doesnt conquer all... depression can get to the best of us.... loved the tale...
Thank you for having the courage to write this story. It takes a very strong person to love someone who is outside what most consider "the norm" and I wish you all the best with your marriage.