All Comments on 'The Double Date That Didn't End Ch. 01-02'
by bosombuddies
- 19 Comments
How is a guy with muscles on muscles invisible and/or a teddy bear to some but a stud to others? Doesn't make sense to me.
A superb sequel to the Bosom Buddies series. Well developed characters and very real, very believable interactions.
A true story of love, lust and friendship.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
I really liked this, especially the characters' awareness of the tension and lines they don't want to cross. I would love to see how that develops.
I love your characters. I'm rooting for all of them, which I didn't think would be the case at the beginning of the story. The tension between them was delicious. The dialogue was perfect. They talk like I do. I'm looking forward to the second installment!
I liked your characters, plot, pacing etc. A truly good read.
good read. you kept rooting your characters on. you also have this set up for a 2nd chapter which i hope you write.......partner switching???
Once again, we get a positively brilliant yarn to read. Sweet, hot, properly paced, simply brilliant.
In the end kind of romantic.
I usually get sick to the stomach when there is fooling around on partners and such, but this was handled in such a way to leave me with a " I've just read a really well told story" feeling, all warm and fuzzy. Well done.
I read "The Waiting Game" while waiting for this second part and really liked it, too. Guess I'll have to start reading the "Bosom Buddies" series while I wait to see if there is another part to this series, or if you come up with something new for your next effort. But I will be watching for whatever you present for our entertainment next!
Lots of possibilities here that I am certain to enjoy. :-)
The Santa bachelorette party is the hottest part of the series. I know you finished this story at chapter 7, but you could easily continue on with it.
I would have given this story 6 stars if I could have. Beautifully paced and well written. I know this seems like a low bar, but the spelling and grammar are flawless, which is a rare thing on this site. Not a single "it's" for "its" or "lay" for "lie"! Thank you.
Just read the below comment from Roboboy about grammar.
I believe it must be an age related thing, but after an ‘if’ another speculative word, the tense changes like so: “if I were to ask you.” Not if I was to ask you.”
Bill S.
Good job, thanks for sharing your work! Gee... i wonder where this is going? Heh,heh, heh...
Oh very good, oh I just seen you have done a part 3, great character and description
I like your writing, and your stories, and the way in which people share instead of cheat, that is kind of written into a non cheesy but classy plot.
To learn that the "biggest breasts" Shane had "ever seen" were only a mere 3 sizes larger than the average nice boobs of a five foot tall hotty, was kind of disappointing to me.
I would've expected an author by the name of bosombuddies to either be somewhat more knowledgable about breast sizes, or else, discrete enough about 'em to not spoil the fun.
If C is average, how is F the biggest he has ever seen?! Or if Ria is a 5' D, how are 5'10" Tracy's G's so enormous? They're just slightly larger than regular in reality.
Anyway, that was a booblover's POV.
Tx