All Comments on 'Three Sisters Ch. 08'

The story is really great. All the set up and characters are done nicely! I hope You plan more stories;)

I really appreciate it! And yes, I have "Book 2" - if I may call it that ;) - in the planning stages right now, so we will definitely see more of the sisters.

Intense, very intense. You're a helluva good writer, this story is fantastic.

You're definitely making me want to keep going!

Can't forget the phone that Alina had access to. There must be some kind of rescue coming.

Some readers probably want that and others don't and would rather see them sold and become slaves.

So I think it would be interesting if Alina were able to be rescued and ultimately get revenge on Magda, including acquiring any money Magda gained from the sale of poor Angie, who could not be rescued.

Then some more chapters devoted to Angie's life as a slave.

Just some more wild guesses.

Keep up the good work!

My favorite part of this story is this passage:

"You were not slaves when you started this morning, just clients to be graded. Now you're nothing more than goods in inventory, and when the hammer falls on the auctioneer's podium in just a few minutes, you will both be legally enslaved for the rest of your lives, the property of someone else who can do with you whatever they wish." Her eyes flicked from one sister to the other and back as she studied their faces.

I love Joanna's teasing way of describing the process, and her obvious delight in the girl's fear. I love her reference to the girls being nothing more than goods in inventory. I love the idea of the girls dreading the sound of the falling hammer which will legally enslave them forever. This is awesome writing, Sir. WELL DONE!

Keep the guesses coming, I really enjoy them and sometimes they spot a missed opportunity that I'll file away for another time ;)

Oh yes, Angie's going to have a very wild ride indeed...

I particularly like how you pick up on some of the subtler things I tried to express in this story, like how Joanna might be good or bad but either way she really is a dom and a bit of a sadist and enjoys freaking out the girls when she can :)

And as always, your enjoyment of my efforts means a lot. Thanks again!