- Incest/Taboo
- Twenty Cups Ch. 02
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All Comments on 'Twenty Cups Ch. 02'
by fsqueeze
- 27 Comments
I literally just started reading chapter 1 last night and finished it this morning. I liked it a lot and was annoyed to have read it as usually I wait until a few chapters are out to read story. Thanks for being awesome, I am sure I will enjoy this one as well.
One of the best I've ever read. Love the way you build tension little by little.
5 stars and fave story and author. Keep writing, I'll keep reading. Thanks for your efforts.
max052
this stuff was really amazing especially the first time with lia.......the description was
so lustful. please make a chapter 3
When will she get involved. she seems to be having a Bad time with Mr. Wonderful. Maybe some time with Brother and Spreading the Truth to other Girl's at School will shut him down.
The writing is decent, but some of the imagery was kind of gross. Like the dog and canned food analogy. Not exactly boner conducive. But that’s a non-issue compared to how I feel about the mom’s characterization or the entire premise of the story. It’s fucked. These mother characters doing sexual things to their children in these stories and then trying to deny any such thing under a veil of medical necessity or some other such rubbish is trite. She’s sucking her son off and letting him touch her. Doesn’t matter why she’s doing it, she’s still doing it. And the weird rules and justifications she comes up with coupled with her unrealistic and strained dialogue and just batshit psycho personality makes this a difficult read. Despite all that, the MC’s relationship with his sisters and their progression into doing things and personalities all fit very well with the story. I just feel like if you’re going to use such an unrealistic premise, you need the reasoning and characterization of the instigator to be a lot more solid. As it stands, the mother is kind of poor in my opinion. And the shit she says is just... no.
By definition masturbate meams self pleasure, so you can't masturbate someone else.
With 20 sample cups, I hope this story continues. Feel vested in the charcters.
What a very very exciting story... I'm not sure if I counted it right. but so far... that's 8 sample cups... right?
Hey, anonymous who wrote on 02/08/18, we get it that you don't like the story, but this is porn man. Go find yourself something you like, fer Pete's sake. The rest of us will enjoy the story and diddle to suit ourselves. I promise not to bitch about the stories you like, too.
When I find a TV show that isn't really believable (most of them) I just stop watching it when it gets too egregious for me to take. You should try doing something similar. What you did is NOT constructive criticism, but is carefully disguised venom. Can you write something better? Do it and let us be your judges.
Like Anon 2/26 said. Everything in the world exists for you to choose from. Leave us what we want to enjoy and go find something for yourself instead of bashing on us and the author Anon 2/8
Can't wait for the next chapter. Mom and Lia both feel like they're ready to cross a definitive line and Emma is ready and waiting in the wings. Looking forward to it
I read part of chapter one the other day, then real life intruded and I had to put it aside. I finally was able to get back to Lit today and finish it. Great story and well worth the wait.
I’m with all the others that are eagerly waiting for the continuation of this story. It’s the best one of all the “sample collection” type stories that I’ve ever read.
So... There's alot of anal sex in this story. I never realized how involved it could be. I wish i could go back to the time before that realization occurred.
I guess