
Hey! I'm an author here, 26 full-legnth novels published and an average score of 4.63, so not so shabby bona-fides. I'm a 50+ year old tech professional used to reading and writing tech docs quickly and efficiently. I spot grammar and punctuation errors pretty easily, mostly due to a too-strict upbringing and a wife with a habit of correcting people (lol). I'm a straight white guy so I'm probably not going to be able to help with gay stuff too well, though I can still do grammar checks and overall flow work - how well you've organized stuff, and alternate ways to approach things if you agree there might be an alternate way of handling a situation. I have a penchant for sci-fi stories, too, and know a lot of tech info. Thus I can help with the plausibility factors, if you want that.