- Erotic Poetry
- If You Want
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Click hereHello, again.
I thought that since I posted a story not too long ago, it was high time to try dabbling into poetry. I love poetry, and free verse rhyme is my favorite writing style. This is my first attempt at creating an erotic poem, so bear with me.
Without further ado, I hope you all enjoy.
-Tigress.
If you want a star,
I'll give you the sun.
If you want a hug,
I'll give you a ton.
If you want my kiss,
I'll give you a fuck.
If you want to cum,
I'll give you a suck.
If you want porn,
I'll give you a show.
If you want my submission,
I'll get down low.
If you want smut,
I'll be your little slut.
If you want me on top,
Making you beg for more,
I'll never stop
Being your whore.
If you want my love,
And all of this
All you have to do
Is give me a kiss.
Promise me I belong to you
Promise me that,
If you want to.
- COMMENTS
I just didn't think it was possible for your writing to decline even more...Honestly you tried, and that's all that matters but by any means your writing has gotten shittier.
Thank you for your feedback, Anonymous, even though it was a bit harsh. I accept any and all criticism in order to be better. Is there anything you suggest I do differently in the future to improve?
this month, surely beats
"roses are red, violets are blue, please swallow when I fill you with goo"