- Illustrated Poetry
- Insomnia-Illustrated
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I wait,
with melancholy,
sleep resisting my freedom.
The dreams,
refuse to bless me,
with pleasing voices in the night.
Awake,
the furor strikes,
despair my fierce opponent.
Not found,
the peace of whimsy,
in the sully hands of slumber.
I wait,
awake,
the dreams,
never found.
- COMMENTS
...dismaying. The methodical structure make me think of tossing and turning. Well done.
I agree "sully hands of slumber" is a wonderful line. Shiver. x
Jesus Christ!, Don't ever do that again! Just kidding. Gahh!
anyway
in the sully hands of slumber.
I like that line, high point
no real low points
100
Marrying that picture to the poem is sheer genius just hope it doesn't give me nightmares tonight!
Holy crap. That pic made me lean back in my seat. Great poem. You can really write.
and "in the sully hands of slumber" is just wonderful. Great to see one of your illustrated poems again!