- Erotic Poetry
- Passionate Anger
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Click hereTENSE. RESTLESSNESS.
THINKING. FEELING.
ANGER. ANNOYANCE.
TAKE ME. USE ME.
SHOW ME. DOMINATE ME.
BEAT MY ASS. MAKE IT RED.
FUCK ME. HARD. HARDER.
DON'T STOP. MAKE ME CRY OUTLOUD.
MAKE ME FEEL YOU. MAKE ME KNOW THAT IT IS YOU.
MAKE ME CUM. FILL ME WITH YOURS.
HOLD ME CLOSE. HOLD ME TENDERLY.
LET ME KNOW THAT YOU CARE.
- COMMENTS
That's what I thought, BBB. You have to look at what the writing is about...and read it in that mindset...in my opinion.
When I wrote this piece, I felt anger and frustration. This was the way it came out...and I felt that this was the only way it could be written.
Thank you for reading, critiquing, and voting on it. I do appreciate hearing people's opinions.
POST YOUR WORK IN ALL CAPS. IT IS ONLINE RUDENESS AND MADE ME WANT TO GIVE YOU A 1, I DIDN'T, BUT SHOULD HAVE
Hey ...
I can really relate to the feeling in this... and there's nothing better than being wrapped in their arms after coming down from that place.
Thank you guys!!!! I really could not see this poem written or changed any other way.