All Comments on 'Touch'

Welcome to Lit;

Especially like that last bit

Of music and silence

The rhythm of love...

This flows very well, and there are spots that show vision... "a lessened space" is a wonderful way to say it near the end, so strong you might consider it as the last grouping of words if you rewrite it, which I think you still should. There is some excess. But really, it shows skill and was very pleasant to sit with.

your images a very strong, you are able to convey the desire so well. the moment before touching, very powerful. i enjoyed it. i hope to see more from you.

feel the electricity building, the more I read. Well done.