- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Unhealthy Affairs
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Click hereUnknown glances
And vacant gestures.
I reach out to shadows
And walk home amongst
Them.
- COMMENTS
This is very solid, and there's not a damn thing wrong with it. I like the broad strokes, and the way it allows the reader to move around within the frame, without being too abstract. Good job.
<br>Ah ha sort of poem.<br>
One instantly recognizes the feeling.<br>
One has, after all, felt it from time to time,<br>
even if one hasn't quite articulated it so specifically.<br>
One is left to meditate.<br><br>
One so loves a poem that allows<br>
one to articulate one's self so readily. <br>
I like this. I want to know more but, in a way, I feel like I know the story.
This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!