- Erotic Poetry
- Valentine~69
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Click hereValentine...
Let's sixty-nine...
Your head between thighs of mine
My head between thighs of thine
A new design
We now define
As we entwine
Giving new meaning to divine
My sweet, sweet Valentine...
Let's sixty-nine...
Until the sun does shine
- COMMENTS
That last line seems a bit odd, like an extra line that really doesn't belong. Just taking it away seems to leave everything sort of hanging. Try to juggle around the last few lines and see what you think; instead of:
As we entwine
Giving new meaning to divine
My sweet, sweet Valentine...
Let's sixty-nine...
Until the sun does shine
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try something like:
As we entwine
My sweet, sweet Valentine...
Let's sixty-nine
And give new meaning to divine...
cool perspective of valentines and positions... a very 'cool' poem.
cute, sexy full of passion and fun...great word scheme and imagery...a real gem!