All Comments on 'Grandma and the Dust Bunnies'
by blaster666
- 14 Comments
Some grannies have help grandsons out. It can be a very beneficial situation for both
I really like this, though I don't get some of it. What is it with Hazel and dust bunnies, and why would she spank him over it. She doesn't act like she is attracted to him, nor does she act like a girl into pain. But it turns out fun.
It made no since at all you sir are a horrible writer. there was no story it was just three pages of bull shit. You ought to give up on writing
After reading about half of the first page that seems to focus on the words "shit" and "turd" instead of anything erotic, I stopped.
but Grandma is an interesting character, so that compensates. The sexual climax was highly erotic. Thanks
Too much energy spent on trying to be humorous. Focus more on erotica.
Very good indeed... though the ending is rushed after their get together... thank you!
The commenters that got really nasty about this story should have just stopped reading and moved to other authors. There's always a few hanging around the edges somewhere that don't seem to accept that they might not like everything that's written. Damn! It you don't like something, don't finish reading it. Move on.
The old fart
3⭐️ story ,, the ending was rushed to just get it finished after they hooked up