All Comments on 'A Brief Encounter'

Excellent story, well written, very readable.

It is difficult to turn a potential rape into a mutually beneficial encounter and you were successful. Worthy of a continuance, "..I know who to come to if I need any further lessons..." .

Excellent job. This screams for a sequel - taking place just before she is married or right after she is married or . . . anytime. Hope you had more in mind.

I'm sorry but it sounded a little too Rapey. I only read about half the first page since it was quite disturbing. I'm sure she probably submit more later on but she sounded like a very little girl and it was quite horrible to read.

You are a good writer with amazing talents though. Maybe you should think more about how you show your characters. What do they sound/feel like?

I meant no offence by my comment, it's just my opinion. :D