All Comments on 'A Dark Desire Ch. 01'

But it seems as if English is not your first language or you are using terms only familiar in the UK, or Australia, or someplace else.

If Anonymous below was to read Stephena's biography, he/she would see that the author is ENGLISH. We non-US citizens (I'm English-born Australian) don't expect US (or any other) authors not to use terms that are US-centric, so why shouldn't this author use terms that are natural to him?

Anyway, Stephena, looking forward to part 2 asap.

Or you could just google words you don't understand.

It's what I do, what especially with some conversions, kmh/mph etc.

Good story, waiting for more.

Hi Stephena!!

Delightful intro and perfect pace....how sweet to effortlessly turn the young innocent into a blackmailing little prostitute!! Thirty quid for a tit rub and a swallowed first-ever blow job?? GREAT price!! Subtle but arousing suggestion that Hayley will soon join in the "business"... who knows?? Maybe she is even more submissive.... In the meantime, can't wait to see the rest of Nathalie's 18 year old body, and watch as it does things that, obviously, money CAN buy!!

Happy New Year and keep writing!!

Chris

a very promising beginning, looking forward to the next chapter.

I love these type of stories but they need to be believable. They are about people with emotions not robots. Sorry. Didn't work for me.

Just what I like to read - sex with a neice.

how can Hailey and Natalie be in their last year of college when they're both only 18 don't you mean their last year of high school