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Click here"Yes, they certainly would. But they don't have to know. It'll be our dirty but wonderful little secret. Meanwhile, are you up for showering with me?"
He nodded, then followed her into the bathroom, wondering if he could keep their dirty but wonderful little secret.
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NOTE: The story above is a rewrite of Past The Point of No Return, which Lit returned because a couple sentences over-stepped the boundary of Lit rules. I took those sentences out, plus did some re-writing and then re-submitted under a different title: A Dirty But Wonderful Little Secret.
Really needed some description of the orgasms and climaxes. Story felt totally incomplete and emotionless without the descriptions, or even an attempt at including them.
Hope this takes on another chapter or two, bringing Merle into the equation.