All Comments on 'A Hostile Takeover Ch. 09'
by predilection
- 5 Comments
Interesting! Two seemingly intelligent people being so naive. They don't communicate with each other what they're thinking or their concerns. They don't find it overly strange they can't reach each other and not having a light bulb click in their heads to try another means to talk to each other. Wonder if they've ever heard of a landline (work, home, hotel)? I was expecting the envelope to be of Carl and his foray with Kim & Mia, but I'm sure that will occur. Carl will probably be getting a similar envelope for him to be a "good cuck" or Sarah will find out about his escapades. Don't see a happy ending here. They'll be torn apart due to their lack of communication and what each has done.
To Anonymous commenter: You are great at pointing out flaws in this story. All or most stories have some flaws. The author doesnt have to keep writing. I just hope the story progresses and we can see where this is headed.
The point of the story is that Matt is manipulating this couple for his own amusement. I assume the story will end when he gets tired of them and casts them out in favor of manipulating someone else.
I think it's possible that Sarah might do something bad to herself, not that such would necessarily be erotic or sexy for me, but if destruction is Matt's game, having her off herself while Carl is out of the country might just be amusing to that sick monster. I still wonder where their daughter comes into all this, as destroying a family might just include their daughter too. It's a wild story, and I'm still glad I'm reading it, but all that coke doesn't do anything for me personally, but story wise I see the hook of it.
Thank you for sharing, Jackie.