All Comments on 'A Maid in the Making'

Please continue. Such a great story.

I also hope that you continue this story.

There's so much good stuff going on I wouldn't know where to begin. Being a Mexican it was refreshing seeing how the roles were reversed in this story. Would love to see more!

Just another dream that I would have love to been into for myself just wonderful!

Very nice, sweet and sexy.

Such a great setting for a story! Well written, please continue.

Great story. The connection between the two was palpable! Loved this story. Thanks for writing it.

delightful

Need more to this story and more like it

Your stories are Amazing!!! We need to see what happens when the neighbor joins in :-)

It would be so hot if Adella ended up pregnant!

Interesting premise.

But sex is useless.

Rushes by sooooo fast. Lacks details.

Two stars.

This story needs a 2nd and 3rd part

I love your stories! I love the affection and mild femdom aspects. I also love that shes a big woman and he's eager to please and she appreciates that and rewards him. Just great!

This is the first story on the list for this writer.

I've become a big fan and decided to start reading all his work, starting at the top.

This is a great beginning. It's so well paced and eloquent. The use of Spanish was simple and handled nicely.

If there's one thing I can say about this writer is that he understands how to build longing and desire. Admittedly the young boy in this story is a raging hormone, as is...but the buildup was really well done.