All Comments on 'A Naive Wife's Boudoir Photoshoot'
by Ricknnca
- 95 Comments
A fabulous and incredibly erotic story. I loved all the details describing how Amy transformed her body and the details of her posing for the camera. Amy is obviously aroused by posing in front of the camera and I loved her seduction by Robert, who saw and exploited her submissive side. Amy loved it.
I can imagine more photoshoots with Robert's motorcycles and more fucking. Robert could take take her to his private sex club where The stunningly shapely and busty Amy would be the star attraction, performing sexual acts and being filmed for the private use of the wealthy. club members. It would be Amy's first porn video, but not her last, as she loved being in front of the camera having sex with both men and women. Amy would become skilled at hiding her secret modeling and porn life - for a while - from her husband, but he would get the best sex ever from his amazingly proficient and sexy wife wife. She would continue with her very rigorous gym workouts to maintain her super fit body. She would get a laser treatment to remove all her hair below her neck. She would get her lips slightly filled and might even have her D-cup tits enlarged to a G-cup, which would make her pornstar body truly spectacular. Her husband quickly bought into her breast enhancement "for her modeling," and lived showing off his stunning and big-titted wif. Regular sessions at the spa and tanning to ensure that her body had no tan lines for the camera. Robert would pay the costs for her modifications and they would fuck frequently and she be his arm candy at events with his wealthy friends and business associates from out of town, dressing Amy to to display her huge tits and shapely body. Amy cannot get enough. cock and was came to crave pussy as well. Robert even might whore the no longer naive beauty for special occasions. Amy would love the attention and the sex with no inhibitions and no guilt from cheating on her husband. Just my speculations on what could happen next with the budding pornstar and adulterous wife.
Absolutely amazing! I really hope that you continue writing about Amy and her modeling experiences and beyond. Be prepared for some haters as Loving Wives is a tough category to receive compliments. My guess is that every single hater out there has been cheated on and is very bitter, so much so that they will demean an author of a fictional story as if it were real. I am really looking forward for more from you. I gave this a solid 5 stars and would have gave it a 10 star ranking if possible. Thank you so much for a great story.
Telling a story about how stupid and naive a woman can be. Too many pages wasted on a seduction and not a loving wife.
"Readers, if you would like to hear more about Amy's journey into modeling life,"... Really? Becoming a cheap whore is called "modeling life"? 1*
I guess e everybody including Amy forgot about the 2 elementary school age kids she is going to lose custody of in the impending divorce...I only hope they soon get a real mother who loves their dad.
Yes you need to expand on this great start to the story. Is the hubby going to go along for this ride or fall to wayside. Maybe he can get his act together and really enjoy her new found sexuality. Have fun with it.
A next step for Amy could be glamour modeling lingerie, for which breast enhancements to really big tits would be a plus. The husband. could be brought along for this step, and it would be an investment for Robert. Things could develop quickly from there, with or without the husband's knowledge: porn, live sex show,s, filmed, of course. This is a fantasy story, and the author can write it so we can suspend our disbelief. There are many ways that Robert can further exploit busty Amy's growing desire to perform sexually in front of a camera and her increasing need to be fucked frequently following her camera and video shoots.
Not a likeable character amongst them. Can’t really comment on the husband as he hardly rates more than a few lines!
we liked it so far. maybe Robert can get other motor cycle club members involved with her also. Hubby might find out what she is up to and get turned on to watch and help.
"Good girl," he said proudly. "You like that cum don't you, baby?"
"I do," swallowing every drop she could get into her mouth, licking her fingers of any residual cum.”
Submissive Amy will do anything Robert wants so she can get his big dick in her mouth and pussy.
YES MORE!!!
Robert teaches Amy and makes her sexual desires come to life.
Then in maybe late in the 3rd or 4th chapter Amy goes on her own and goes so very rogue, making for interesting moments.
These stories are silly. The woman always starts out a simple girl next door introverted wall flower and suddenly decides she'll be just another worthless cheating housewife. No regard for the babies at home or the husband who's been by her side throughout. Like I said, silly. 1*
She isn’t naive. A 16 year old is naive, she is a woman who feels no guilt or remorse about cheating on her husband.
She knew what she was doing and what was going to happen. She didn’t stop it because, like many women who work out and lose weight, she wanted to trade up.
Her lack of guilt shows that she already left her marriage, she just hasn’t acknowledged it yet.
Good read however a little more proof reading would have made for smooth reading i.e. he / she reversed etc. Look forward to a second instalment.
Thank you. You so perfectly describe what a whore is. Once again proving that someone invented the hot wife term to avoid the shame of being just another slut. Nonsense
Keep going with Amy giving in to being a hot wife remember don't listen to the haters keep writing about her journey.
Don't worry about the critics. Nobody is forcing them to read these stories. Keep this story going. Looking forward to reading more about Amy's adventures
She should start posing nude including videos and having sex with more guys and her husband get turned on by it and get fit.
As far as I'm concerned, YES, I'm dying to hear more about Amy's journey deeper into a hot, cheating wife model! Her husband doesn't need to find out about it for a long time. She needs Robert's cock to breed her, and the same with many of his motorcycle club friends! Amy's sexual awareness has been fully awakened and she is going to crave feeling other cocks larger than she is used to filling her up and taking their cum!! Easily 5 stars, and certainly am hopeful this is just the first step of her entering into being a cheating, big cock craving slut!!
Please a second chapter. Does she leave her husband to trade up / indecent proposal type of thing....
Amy could join the select group of glamour models with huge tits who are photographed draped over motorcycles and hot rods as if they were fucking them. For the shoot with Robert’s club Amy would be paid as a model, of course, and then he would tell her that the men in the motorcycle club would fill all her holes with cock, and she could expect substantial tips from all of them. Robert would arrange more such “modeling” opportunities for Amy, and she would be paid handsomely for the modeling and with the extra tips she would be making almost as much as her husband for the part time work. Amy is delighted at all the opportunities to show off her amazing body and massive enhanced tits in front of the camera and get so much cock as a well-paid bonus. She quickly lost all her inhibitions and will fuck anyone, man or woman, that Robert wants. He knows that Amy cannot get enough cock and so is his perfect submissive slut and whore. Her husband would be aware of her glamour modeling, but not of her whoring, and he likes to display his very hot and superfit wife with huge tits whenever he gets a chance. Amy will give him world class blowjobs and enjoy his average-sized cock in her pussy and ass. He is a happy, if clueless husband, and is delighted with the money he thinks she is making from the “modeling.” He is delighted to care for their kids when she is on a “photo shoot” if Amy cannot arrange it. The cheating whore with a model’s face and a toned and very stacked pornstar body and her very average husband continue to be a loving and devoted couple, and to no one’s surprise, are good parents. However the author moves forward, this is, and will be, a fabulous and incredibly erotic fantasy story.
It was a good story. And with the good erotic tale that it was, it also deserved to be proofread a second or even third time. As a writer myself, there’s been many times I’ve gone over my work once published and found many gaffes that I missed. A second set of eyes NEVER hurts.
But fret not good writer, you can always go back and republish this story once you’ve re-edited it.
One of the issues I had was your misuse of pronouns (he instead of she), that’s something that’ll throw your readers off as they’re trying to enjoy your hot story of Amy as she loosens her morals, allowing another man to fuck her in the shower,
As to your question, yes, we do want to read more about Amy and where life takes her ☀️
I love that it appears that Amy will be totally on board for whatever plans Robert has for her, and her cheerful and very submissive enthusiasm makes for a fun, and very erotic fantasy. Please ignore those commenters who have a hard time accepting erotic fantasies, even as they seem to be obsessed with them.
Great development. Please continue. Lots of directions to explore. Even her baseball mom friends
Well written, great steady build up, fantastic delivery! PLEASE.....more!!!!
More please! You are great at helping the reader create a mental picture of the action.
Not really. Amy's character is merely one more of countless indifferentiated cheating women who can't keep their thighs closed. This story merely highlights the stereotype of a weak willed, simple minded woman who hasn't the presence of mind to guard herself from a predator. If you think about it, with the mindset of the crowd who likes this, Amy should rightfully be devoured by this beast.
She should lose the life she has and be plunged into the oblivion of a sex slave mastered by a narcissistic sociopath. After being objectified for a number of years she could find herself shoved out the studio backalley door to join the dumpsters. After all, she's probably been used like a dumpster by Robert and his friends for so long that Amy and the dumpsters are on a first name basis. She could go back to Brian. If she does she will find he finally gave up on her and moved. This sums up these tales.
I am glad I stuck with this story. Good buildup. Please continue her journey, though the writing could use some additional eyes to proofread before publishing. A suggestion (because it's always my favorite): have her start to play with two fit men together and then surprise her from behind with two cocks in her pussy.
Amy will share her secret with her best friend who gets so turned on that she wants to watch and will eventually be drawn in and Robert will have his sex club. Perhaps another female model brought in to help with the shoot and Amy has her first lesbian encounter...keep the chapters coming
I loved your previous story with Bella and this one is just as good but dfiierent. Love the details descriptions of her body and love that you're taking it slowly. I also love to laugh at the anonymous Losers of Loving Wives and their comments. Keep it up Rick!
A wonderful sexy story. It was well written and I loved the theme of the story. I hope there will be more chapters to continue.
I love photo session stories and this was a really good one. We need to read how she feels when Jerry shows her the photos. She needs to show them to her husband and see how he feels about them. And she needs to tell her husband about getting turned on and fucking Robert. Really good story, keep it coming.
I want to thank the author for adding another terrific and very erotic story to his Bella series. This series-to-be focuses specifically on Amy’s photoshoots, and adds a unique twist: wealthy businessman Robert who has quickly spotted Amy’s beauty, sexuality, and sexual submissiveness. This opens all kinds of opportunities for the story. I hope both series have many chapters to go. The Bella series and the Amy story are fabulous.
We don’t know much about Amy’s husband, Brian, except that he is very overweight, with a big beer belly. He seems to have no outstanding characteristics, but apparently is a good husband and dad. Amy, on the other hand, has transformed herself into a very fit, muscular, and sexy woman, with a body obviously designed to be photographed and used hard and often. Brian may have a role as Amy’s supportive spouse for her glamour modeling, but it is doubtful that Amy will share her sexual escapades with him. As suggested before, with the money she is getting from her “modeling,” Brian will be quite happy and is unlikely to press her her on Robert’s other plans for the submissive sexpot and emerging exhibitionist. He seems to be happy when his wife is happy without further thought. It appears that Amy feels no guilt or shame but rather, feels only satisfaction and sexual pleasure from the nude modeling and fucking she is getting from Robert and soon, other men.
Well title says naive but damn she is a submissive slut. I think next week she will be pushed into situation where there is more than Robert. I hope
Yes, this was a great story, well developed with excitingly written sex scenes. Please continue. Next photo shoots include multiple partners and the photographer. 5 stars.
This story is really hot! I am so happy for Amy that she gets to experience this! I just wonder what will happen the day Brian gets to see the calendar...
“He lifted her enough for his cock to fall out, "Go to your knees," he directed her. Watching her drop immediately to her knees in front of him made him smile. "We'll teach your little pussy how to take more," he grinned down at her.”
This is among many passages that tell us that Robert fully intends to train the still naive model with the incredible body to take big cock in all her holes, starting with her pussy and mouth. Submissive Amy already is learning how to please him with her mouth and throat and wants more. She will do anything to please Robert and is consumed by her own sexual pleasure.. Enjoying his cum, Amy gives no thought whatsoever to her husband or the fact that she is married. Fabulous story.
"Thank you," meeting his eyes on her. "It's been a long journey to becoming fit. These are the only things that have stayed," looking down at her big boobs he was admiring.”
Nothing like big tits on a hot body to get “admiring” looks from men. The bigger the better.
To Mattenw. Why are you so obsessed with stories you claim to despise? Your sanctimony does not ring sincere.
“She took a step back, bending at the waist slowly for Robert's benefit, looking into the camera, letting her boobs hang over the seat. She spread her hands out, one on the tank, the other on the rear fender, as she flexed doing a pushup, her boobs pressed into the seat and back up, the striations of her muscles showing.”
By now Amy loves the erotic modeling, as it is foreplay for the sex she wants to come. Soon she will get all the photo shoot foreplay and all the cock she could desire. She will love the money and the sex, thinking that she is a model, and not a whore. But that distinction may not matter to the horny busty beauty.
Jerry has got to get a taste or two of Amy. She still needs a manager who will take advantage of his newest find.
The nosy elderly neighbor perhaps gets wind of things. Just turn her out slow slow slowly No need for the porn film orgy etc yet. Slowly.
Thanks for the feedback everyone... Part 2 is ramping up nicely. Using several of your suggestions to develop Amy further!
I agree with Anonymous who hopes that Amy’s transformation moves along slowly and is not rushed.
Nothing naive about a slut. She wants to be dominated by a strange dick and went out there to find it. It's the opposite of naive.
Wow this is fantastic story. Need a good series of this where it leads to somewhere her husband reluctantly agrees her to pose more boudoir shoots and her relationship with the rich man develops
I hoped you wouldn't notice !
But age has crept up and I'm a bit slow off the mark these days.
Lue
I hope Amy continues to slowly become a slut for his big cock and introduces cockolding to her hubby and his little penis
So hot to see Amy coming out of her shell, learning to appreciate her body and it's effect on her as well as on men. She slipped so naturally into becoming submissive to Robert. Great awakening story. Can't wait to see where it will lead.
While reading the story I felt like watching a movie. Amy's transformation and modelling is great touch.
Please continue the story........
Well written, quite hot, but then you look to the other side of the story and the man she will be destroying. Then you wonder how long it will just be fun and games for Amy as well.
More, please. I think that it is just the start for her journey. I think that Robert has other friends.
I enjoyed the early part as she discovered the idea of a photoshoot and struggled with the idea of exposing herself for the camera for boudoir shots. To that point, everything was quite believable and something many husbands would like their wife to try. It was an enjoyable read. The remainder of the story was ok, but more predictable fantasy.... big tit woman gets fucked by big dick (yawn). Did her hubby ever get to see the photos of the first shoot? How is she going to reconcile to him or her kids that her pictures are going to be circulated on a calendar of an upscale motorcycle club? The dom-sub part was a little much, too, roughly slamming the last half of his hard dick into her... and all this from what started out as a photoshoot to excite her husband? You write well, with nice character development, but the story line went off the rails for me, at least, soon after Robert appeared.
Outstanding story! 👍 Excellent balance between the story line and the salacious culmination.👍 A continuation of Amy's metamorphosis would be greatly appreciated.
Wow, it's really a nice plot and the way you wrote looks really interesting. By the way I'm a married woman, nickname Baggy. You really made me wet with the story. Is there part 2 of this chapter?
I would definitely like more of Amy’s adventures. This was an exciting story. Keep it up.