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The story was too short, not enough teasing and details. Explain in a bit more descriptive way so that visualization isn't difficult
UGH!
Too little background. Then you fell off a cliff with the ending. There simply wasn't enough of this sad little story to make it clever or entertaining.
Poor pete
Damn you hate pete. Gave him a small dick and a complete humiliation weekend stacy is pitying him and dont even finish the story to at least have a somewhat happy ending. Had potential but sorry gave you a pity 3 star like pete got a pity fuck. Rewrite or finish the story.
Interesting But
Poor Pete, as mentioned a nerdy virgin and you gave him a small dick, I'm sorry but that's just fucked up and really ruined it.
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