All Comments on 'Adventures of Jason, Teenage Stud Ch. 02'
by westerntiger
- 15 Comments
Superb if rather too short sequel, this chapter is most welcome, from one of the site's finest authors. Great story telling from start to finish. Five stars.
I just happened to be re reading comments from my own story, saw yours, had a freak out you commented! And came here to see if you continued this one. And you had! In fact, it was only posted a couple hours ago ... Holy crap that's weird!!! Ok I'm gonna read now! Eeee I'm excited! I love this character.
When saw the Adventures of Jason posted I was pleased to see you back after a long absence. While the sex scenes in the first and this second chapter compare favorably to your early work, overall neither is on par with the likes of the Drifter, Going Back to School Day, Dylan Joins the Band, The Bet, etc. The new piece(s) is long winded, repetitive and way too much background before the reader reaches Jason’s adventure. Even the sex scenes are a bit drawn out; lack the tightness and erotic intensity of earlier scenes. Only average compared to earlier tales.
Welcome Back! Hoping thar Jason's adventures are just starting. Maybe an adventure with Mom???
Just one question: is there a version of this series, maybe on a different website, where you don't have to make up a bullshit reason why a junior in high school is "eighteen years old," and you can just let him be the age that an 11th grader should be? Asking for a "friend."
It's me. I'm the "friend."
Just a lot of fun to read and imagine this dude's fire hose and the Goth covering each other in their copious amounts of fluid. Thanks!
This was a very fun read...sexy, nasty, and just plain fun!!
On to next parts now...yyyaaayyy!!!!
Five**5**Stars🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌
The amazement of seeing a huge cock for the first time cannot be underestimated. The amazement gives way to curiosity and a wanting to try it. Lust can cloud the female mind. If a boy has stamina or fast recovery to go with his unusual size, a girl will become delirious. If he has the trifecta of size, stamina, and recovery, she will think she is in heaven.
Wish we could edit our own comments. I should have written "overestimated" instead of "underestimated" in my comment
Go Jason! Goth Girl sounds perfect for a late night anonymous fucking. She has a crazy mind with no inhibitions, an outstanding body, and a pretty face. The sex scene was great. She was insatiable but his super cock that never tired rocked her world. My only gripe is that when she showed the presence of mind to lock the front door and put up the closed sign, that they didn't go to the back room to avoid interruption. I would rather have Jason and Goth Girl have another spectacular coupling than them being disturbed by the guy wanting gas
Stopped reading after the first several paragraphs were nothing but a rehash of part one.
Didn't make it to the end of page one. All I read was what already happened in the first chapter. We've read that one. We don't need to read it again under the guise of chapter two, and the rush to assure us that Jason is 18 years old despite all your previous vague descriptions otherwise reads as you're just saving your butt by explicitly stating he's of legal age.
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There are a couple of things I can't continue to ignore. Many, many times Amber is referred to as an older woman. A one year difference in age does not make an "older woman." Whether they're 18 and 19 or 45 and 46, they're basically the same age. Trying to paint it differently is just bizarre and annoying. If your intent by labeling Amber as such is to have us thinking she's more experienced than Jason, you should just say that (and you did a couple times).
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The other thing you repeat is that Hank cheated on Amber with a flat-chested slut. Over and over again, flat-chested slut. First, it's completely unnecessary. We get it. Amber has big boobs and the other girl doesn't. Second, repeatedly pointing out that the other girl doesn't have big boobs but Hank cheated on his fiance with her anyway gives the impression that Amber's best and only asset as a potential spouse are her boobs. That's a disservice to Amber and outright lame. Third, Hank is the one who cheated. That's slutty behavior. We don't know anything about the girl he cheated with (besides her apparent flat chest). If you insist on slut-shaming someone, it should be Hank, not the person he cheated with.
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There could have been something here, but I quickly lost interest because of the points I made above. Two stars.