All Comments on 'Auntie Knows Best Pt. 02'
by westjayne495
- 5 Comments
Another great addition to the series
I hope they both manage to convince mum to get involved!
This story continually improves, despite the fact that it's already set incredibly high standards for itself. Rapidly becoming one of my favourite stories on here, and certainly one of my favourite authors. Can't wait for some more. Another 5 Stars awarded!
Like all your stories so far, this is so flipping erotic, it is hard to get to the end without needing release. You have such a sexy way with words.
This story is thrilling, like almost all your stories. My only complaint, and I feel churlish bringing it up, is the that the POV seems to segue from Jack to Jayne without warning near tge end
Still, five stars for the unique combination of erotic tension with psychological realism, all while keeping it an enjoyable fantasy. That can't be easy to achieve.