All Comments on 'Bachelor Party Gone Wrong Pt. 04'
by somebody123
- 30 Comments
Sorry, this turn to the story wasnt something erotic for me, completely ruined the entire saga in my eyes.......
I loved it! I tried a story like this years ago. Yours is wilder.
Don
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Absolutely love it, I almost came without even touching myself. I can't wait to read about what happens if/when the video gets back to his wife.
Love it! Hot story, glad he fully used and found his place as a submissive.
Your stories are usually great but, in my opinion:
sometimes they thake too mucho to develop into a sex scene.
Explaining so much of straight sex in a gay section, and having a girl involved all the time, it kinda ruined the experience for me.
OH WOW! I neeeed more of this story! Love the slow and steady build-up. It makes the finale so much more intense and hot.
I hope I get to hear soon how that tape comes in handy for everyone to continue using him/me ;-)
This sex scene was worth the wait, so fucking hot!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
So freaking hot. I edged to this for 2 hours- didn't want it to end! Please continue! Or write a new story if this is the end. All your stuff is amazing!
This story was so hot. I wonder what happened to him after this night. Did his friends continue to use him? Did he go through the wedding? I bet there’s some good stories about the honeymoon.
Great Story, of course I was so envious i want a re-run of my bachelor party :)
This was comical as hell! I laughed so much with the "do it for the $50,000"😂😂
I'd love to hear what happened when they got home. I imagine they all eventually turned his wife into their little slut as well, and he probably ended up getting used by all of his other friends at every party
want the continuation of this newbie bitch - add crossdress to his life, as well
I went from 3 stars to 5 how could this be the ending? Now he's their no doubt secret bitch, and what about his new wife, what would she become?
I agree with the previous posts. This cannot be the end! What happens when he returns home. Maybe he doesn't get married to the girl. Maybe his boss and friends use him; rent him out; maybe the others also become slaves to Jared's cock!
Great story should do wedding day, night, honeymoon, anniversary not to mention Lil brothers bitch
I have missed emotions about it. He needed to get the entire 50K. But he also needed to go home with Jared as his Alpha and the story morph into a new story one of Alpha/fag-submissive and the marriage go poof. As for the job, what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas. But Jared does make him do more porn. Also, the stepfather needs to then get invited to use the stepson along with Jared's more masculine friends. This second story seems to be about five chapters is written as open ended as this one.