All Comments on 'Birthday Pool Party Ch. 21'
by WittyUserName
- 7 Comments
Well, you’ve happily proven me wrong. After the first spring break chapter it looked to be merely a tropical fuckfest, but you’ve built a very strong story while continuing to further develop your clearly defined characters. Seeing Hazel cut loose was not only incredibly hot, but laid a pathway to the girls’ realizing they’re not tethered to Steven.
I can't believe I'm caught up to this point and now having to wait for the Next Chapter of this exciting story. It's got me drooling in my pants!
That Hazel episode is the hottest yet! You definitely put the work in, whether it's editing, brainstorming, etc. It's content this great that has me patient as ever whenever you say you need a break or whatever.
Sex scenes need to be a lot longer
Look up the senior year memories story series