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Click hereShe stood before him with head bowed, her dignity sinking to her feet, near to tears.
"You forgot to get her to count. Never mind, next time." John told him with a chuckle. "What next?"
"Oh! Yea! What do you say now pet?" Kevin asked her.
In confusion she tried to think what he meant. Remembering what Kelly had told her she stammered, finding it difficult to speak. "I. I. I'm sorry, Master. Thank you for punishing me, Master," she said, only just refraining from rubbing a red sore ass.
Her face was crimson from embarrassment, her cheeks streaked with tears but she tried to hold herself together with what was left of a dented dignity. She determined to behave for the rest of the weekend to avoid another shameful episode needing to hold on to the shreds of self-worth.
John stood over her large and dominating. "I had better go help the others see to the ponies. I'll leave you to it. Well done pet. You have done well. Soon you will be good enough to earn a slave name and your collar."
- COMMENTS
Wow what a story! I love how the story progresses to her being led around on a leash naked, one of my fav fantasies. Kevin is kind of an asshole but that just makes the story better. I would definitely be orgasming frequently much to my humiliation!
Plot line is just fantastic. As is your ability to get inside Brandy's head and her emotions. A few minor bugs are in your spellchecker; give her 10 swats on her 'bounding' backside for me, please, and by all means keep on keeping on.
DHL
I'm not sure why Brandi and Kelly are submitting but some competitive rivalry of their frendship is at play. Brandi's orgasims are amazing, especially those without direct clit stimulation. Terry and John are working them very well. There seems to be some concent from the gyrls, crazy as that is. Can a guest stay at the ranch, I'd love to watch some of this unfold.
The Pony gyrl is quite simply amazing to watch.
though Kelly would have been bared and Brandi as well, the traing was a little over the top, A Master, would never take advantage of a weak moment to set a contract for a pair of novice D/s well at least not in the clubs we have been too.
the dialog is a little stilted at times. Thanks for the work!