All Comments on 'Cheryl and Meryl Pt. 01'
by kathrynmburke
- 9 Comments
Cliffhanger as to whether little lifts in 9 months time
I think you got the names mixed up!
Brilliant, I wish I had a sister like that when it was my first time, Christ put me off men for months, only upside was that it lead me to look elsewhere, so I'm now totally bi.
Jeremy Mathers? Really? You realize that this is almost the same as the actor named Jerry Mathers who played on Leave It To Beaver. [Shaking my head]
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It's a cute story so far. I gave you a 5 even though I'm leaning more towards a 4. But your crafting of Cheryl's personality and obvious love for her twin sister convinced me to give you a bonus point. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
As usual, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing it, Kathryn!
first story I've read like this here...novelty is good!
Nice Cheryl gave in, fairly quickly...
very unusual these days they both have muffins, which I happen to love, actually they're almost unicorns in that regard-razor companies have taken over woman's bodies these days-it IS a multi-billions $ biz
...and blondes are almost always going to have modest bush with more or less straight pubes ..majority of my gf's have been brunettes...
as for him packing 8"...read not that long ago, curious because some many guys seem to have 8, 9, or even10" in Lit stories-average of the pros in smut these at least in the States are 8". so he's in VERY rare territory already-DEF probably the biggest Meryl's, and Cheryl, ever going to have-probably best to do it quick and get it over with...thought hymen's pretty rare there days anyway, what with all the sports, and playing around in their BR's, and reading and looking at on-line smut modern women do these days
-thought it a bit unusual NO mention made of birth control-never know how many impressionable young over-18 year olds are perusing Lit these days looking for/at 1st time stories...
an easy 4, and bookmark-looking forward to following chapters-very likable characters