by trippy64
i understand it's your first time writing
as the story progressed, you got better, more descriptive
suggest next time, before you publish, read it and see it as you were a stranger, did it get you off? this time not so much...maybe for you as remembering the fun but not so much fun for a outsider. good effort. i gave you 4 of 5
Really enjoyed your story and the feelings that were exhibited.
I see where you are coming from, and will review more in depth.
A nice believable description of an experience that many young men have had
in their first year away from home. One of the great things about a college education.
I hope this author will be a regular contributor to Literotica in future. He's a good, very talented, writer
Enjoyed your story, sounds a lot like my story. Think about it all the time.
Sounds a lot like me an my bud in HS. We didn't do anything gay either... We called it playing "Honies" and told ourselves we were practicing for girls...lol Thanks ..brought back a lot of hot memories
I remember getting so drunk with both m/f college friends and one of the guys describing a similar path in his life. Brave to bring it up.
Very nice first time story, although it wasn't just a first time...they did it again and again. Not surprising, since it felt SOO good for both boys. Made nme nice and hard and wet, too.