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All Comments on 'Elizabeth's Roman Awakening Ch. 06'

by LeMondial

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Your story is great and getting even better with this latest chapter. The intrigue of having Elizabeth's sister (making big assumption here... could be Michael's sister) and the daughter suddenly show up just as things are heating up is fantastic.

I can just picture the mother's anguish if the daughter competes with her for "her man" and the father's shame if he becomes aroused with the possibility of the his daughter being seduced by a much older black man. Wow, great possibilities here - as a wife and mother I can't wait to see where this one goes!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good stuff

this is good as with all your stories....and I like the non-reluctance aspects....but would be nice to see a bit more tension and have Michael stand up a bit

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good Detail

The detail in your story draws me in to the sights, smells, feelings and actions. I look forward to many more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
the daughter and aunt

For them to show up in Italy would be a journey of a lifetime. The Prince has a cortege of people to do his bidding. Suppose the Prince has a 18 year old black daughter with a dominant personality, she could meet with the daughter and take her on a personal tour. Prepping her fot bbc of young virile black studs, she might detect a twinge of overt racism in her and start spanking her red asss while overpowering her by stripping her and forcing her to kiss together with interlocking tongues as an act of total submission before getting her to start sucking offered bbc. Then getting breeded with black seed. More breeding sessions with various black studs and no food for a day will have her totally broken as a submissive for bbc.

The aunt? Assume it is Elizabeth's sister, she will play a strong role in domesticating her into a black breeded submissive slut for all time with twinge of racism spanked from her reddening ass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nice one

Hope you will post more frequently. Keeps the momentum going. Lots of possibilities open up with the end of this chapter. Hope the triangle will be explored further in more detail.

Lets have the next one soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
continue...Good Base.

Let the story roll, Dude.

You're stories are well written with only the occasional wrong use of a preposition here or there. A volunteer line editor could help.

Mikey needs a little more character development. For someone who handles international negotiations he should have some kind of backbone.

Maybe Jusef can raise his station in life by allowing Mike to service say a bottom of the list wife of Jusef's brothers. You know, a large hairy African woman who outweighs him by a couple hundred pounds.

The contrast of Elizabeth to the woman would starkly teach Mikey what he has lost.

Enjoy all the cuck stories you've written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
When's the next?

This is a great story but one loses the threads if there's a huge gap between the posts. Hope you will upload the next one soon. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
What happened...

to the next chapter? Hope the next is in the making.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hey, we still waiting

Lets continue the story pls.

cuckoldxshitcuckoldxshitalmost 10 years ago

very hot. The idea that cuckolding is natural and part of evolution and that beta males deserve to be cuckolded has been clearly brought out in the story. cucks like us do get satisfaction from watching and humiliation is natures way of satisfying the loser. awesome story. wanked through all the six parts. thx

GokkyGokkyalmost 10 years ago
Excellent

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
1*

Didn't read. Saw a LeMondial story and immediately voted 1 star

octabrainoctabrainover 9 years ago

To Anonymous: "1*

Didn't read. Saw a LeMondial story and immediately voted 1 star"

Нахуй иди, ёбаный мудак. Не читал он...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fantastic Chapter

I love the way your characters are so well described. They just jump off the page and I can almost see them. Please publish the next chapter soon. I almost feel like I am Elizabeth. Will Joseph breed her? What about the daughter. Are you going to bring her into the story?

Please keep this series going!

TigersmanTigersmanalmost 7 years ago
Good story

This was a really good story. I loved the fact the wife got black bred like all white girls/women should be. As her pregnancy progresses she will grow to love the black baby growing in her white belly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Magnificent Story

Loved it.

I too have been cucked by a powerful black man whilst my wife and I where on a holiday in West Africa.

The sight of my wife being fucked in front of me gave me the most intense emotions of my entire life. The jealousy, humiliation and arousal were almost overwhelming.

The pain I felt in my heart and my stomach was fortunately matched by my throbbing penis.

She was with him for about a week, the longest week of my life!

Every time they were alone together I would be in the hotel room constantly masturbating unable to stop.

That was many years ago and I still fantasize about it. In fact I'm now going wank myself again.

lov2pleasulov2pleasuover 1 year ago

Love this very much, what a powerful man joseph is n wants , i am at chapter 7 i do hope there daughter joins in

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