by emelle78
Definite issues with punctuation lacking at both ends of the story.
Can't compare it to others in the series, as I'm unsure if I have read any.
Sorry 2 was ok, being very short and a tease, I thought maybe it was a simple connecting story to build on Erin's horniness and growing lust for cock. But neither 2 nor 3 compare to the first story in the series. You've done very well with developing Erin and Amanda, and you have great descriptions of sex based on 1, I would prefer less teasing and more sex.