All Comments on 'Finding Comfort in Her Son's Arms Ch. 01'
by hasnoalias
- 22 Comments
Nice story, please write a part2, they now must tell how they feel about each other, he is in love with his mom and she is in love with her son, they now are a couple, mom needs to get pregnant and son will tell her that she is absolutely incredibly beautiful with a baby bump, mom is hot and horny and thet will experience each other forever.
Wow! There is a second chapter, and more. The movement from one brain to the other was surprisingly hot! MORE please.
The story is hot but it's so fucking confusing to read! You keep changing the point of view from first person to third person and back. Please consider getting an editor. Four stars.
Found a bit odd switching from first person to almost third person during the sex…a little more consistency would have been a bit smoother read for me.
Sons non feelings for mom are confusing.He loves her but wants to toy with her eemotions during a crisis in her life.Just love her like a real man and everything will fall into place.
Give his mother a baby ?
Do you realise the possible issues involved with that?
Amen to the first-to-third person, back and forth. Very confusing at times. And a little more dialogue would’ve helped too.
Very nice story I love how they feel for each other and afraid to admit it keep up the good work 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great imagination...poorly, and cheaply written like most writers on this site. Your mother isn't just another woman to take cheaply.
If your mother gave her unbridled self to you it would be an "Otherworldly" experience that no other could match.
Mr Hardcock and his mom look to have a fun future together, if they ever learn to speak to each other about any of their desires instead of just constant wondering. Shame there were too many paragraphs about their insecurities and her lack of sexual experience and her repression. That shit was boring as hell and annoying to read. Also where was the dialogue? Story feels so cold and empty without much dialogue.
I hope this improves in the next parts. Having just read another story by this author, they tend to read very similarly with the same kinds of mistakes and style, so I won't expect too much. I hope the mother ends up with child but it might not be this author's style sadly.