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Click here"Thank you, I had a lot, and for too long in me." Janice said.
"Let's see how we go from here." Fiona said and moved her eyelids many times.
"Oh, you fool, I feel for you." Janice said.
"I know you do, and that makes it even more valuable. You really moved out of your comfort zone." Fiona said stroking Janice's hair.
"What happens now?" Janice asked.
"Since you are alone this weekend, why don't you stay here with me." Fiona said.
"I could, yes." Janice said.
"Lovely, then let's get some sleep and see what we do, when we wake up." Fiona said.
Janice kissed Fiona deeply they embraced and played with their hands, after the kiss.
Fiona turned the light out, cuddled with Janice, "Night love."
"Night love."
- COMMENTS
Good story, thank you for your thoughts on it and I'll try to get it into our time if I can shake the dust off my mind..
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Difficult to read would like if you could contact me through mail, if you are interested.
The initial meeting between the two was good , the party scene was decent, but everything after seemed awkward and the dialogue seemed contrived or forced. The dialogue killed the mood for me.
But the writing is very stiff. You have to write like people say it and not as if it was written in the 1800's.